Astro-reality's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BENDY'S NEW GROOVE]

Quite good, a very good and fluent animation I have seen here, and I need to give you a compliment for perfectly adjusting the voice acting to the animation, this must have taken a lot of time to do.

Due to the short duration the viewer doesnt get the time to get into it and to pull the viewer into the joke in this animation, but the graphics and sound, everything was adjusted well to each other.

It is just a practice animation so I understand the short duration here, but I would love to see longer works from you as this is very well done.

A longer animation in this same way of this quality definitely will get a 5/5.

[Shrekfest 2018 Reanimated - Scene 41]

Haha, this was a good work. Good sense of humor and the animation was of quite a good quality in my opinion, much better then the animations which use tweening. The style in which you drew the characters works very well for the humor and giving the female a male voice only adds to the humor in this animation.

The background could have some more work, and the duration was rather short.

Still a 4.5/5 for the humor and animation style, and to support you as this generally got a bit of a too low voting in my opinion.

[Overwatch Halloween special!]

There are things which need improvement, but in particular the development of the flow of the story-line is something in which you seem to have put a lot of work. It was interesting to see how the antagonist dealt with each character but there are things which need to be worked on. The most important is the audio, it seems like a better sync between the voices/sound effects and music is needed, but also there was a problem where some voices seem to have had a different volume, it is important that you synchronize them in such a way that they are adjusted to each other. You could also try to look into using more esthetical backgrounds, perhaps you can ask artists on Newgrounds for help with this, it would give a different feeling to the continued episodes I think and could possibly give it a much more interesting appearance to your audience. The animation is ok, but I would suggest to reduce your tweening and try to put more time in the animation frame-by-frame, this is a difficult and time-consuming process, but regarding the good flow of the story-line you have it would really improve your animation in my opinion. The music fitted well, but for the voices and voice actors I think it is important that there is an improvement here, the voice acting could have been done better.

You are talented in the flow of the story-line and adjusting that exactly to the time lapse, but work is needed on the audio and some of the graphics.

CrazyApple responds:

Thanks for the feed back!

[The Dr. Mario Show & Knuckles]

This was well done, but a bit too short to be honest. I have to say that the way how you animated this was good, it looked like the way how things you see on tv are animated.

I would suggest working more on the appearance though, the presentation is where things can be improved, this has to do with the duration. It is a bit too short to give a good presentation of what you want to show.

[Beyond the Fog: Episode 1 - A Rude Awakening]

This is a good submission. The animation and graphics are very well done, I was especially amazed by the backgrounds which you had here. There were some problems with the pacing as someone else pointed out. There was a bit of a problem with the audio in some points, where the voices were a bit too loud, but overall I think this was good.

9Hammer responds:

Hey, thanks! I'll definitely be taking the critiques into consideration in the long run as well.

[Pmation: "Having A Blast"]

Top quality,

Great music, great use of sound effects in the animation, good story-line. Good animation style, I think that this is a great work.

[Let's Blew It]

I think that I didnt get the joke, I liked the style and graphics of the fox, but I didnt get any of the other things.

Balram740 responds:

Thanks for your feedback.actually i'm new to animation so i will try my best for next animation.

[Space_Chuvak]

Ok, the starting scene was interesting, I like the effect with the colours and stars.

but there were several things in this. A guy being shot doesnt look like that, but would rather have enlarged eyes, or a different kind of pupils, hanging face.

This animation uses tweeking, instead of frame-by-frame animation, which could work, but a problem is in the style where the thickness of the lines is different which creates a problem in the perception. I would have done something different with the person laughing at the end, the ball which is used here to represent the inner part of his mouth is too big.

The scene was strange, you got that eery style well in your animation.

The music was good and fitting.

I tried to be constructive.

ArtemERROR404 responds:

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it)