Astro-reality's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rick and Morty New Season]

Wow, you got luck with that voice actor, the voices really sound like the original Rick and Morty. No idea if any of the people working on the show saw this and I wonder what their response would be. xD

I thought this was great, I like the Rick and Morty show and you got some of the craziness of the original show down into this. The animation quality is good with a good choice of background music.

hazencruz responds:

You're welcome. (I work for hire.) <3

[Mae's Walking Cycle Animation]

Very good development in your animation skills, the head is going down accordingly with the walking and legs moving.

stevanisya responds:

thankss !!

[Overwatch Halloween special!]

There are things which need improvement, but in particular the development of the flow of the story-line is something in which you seem to have put a lot of work. It was interesting to see how the antagonist dealt with each character but there are things which need to be worked on. The most important is the audio, it seems like a better sync between the voices/sound effects and music is needed, but also there was a problem where some voices seem to have had a different volume, it is important that you synchronize them in such a way that they are adjusted to each other. You could also try to look into using more esthetical backgrounds, perhaps you can ask artists on Newgrounds for help with this, it would give a different feeling to the continued episodes I think and could possibly give it a much more interesting appearance to your audience. The animation is ok, but I would suggest to reduce your tweening and try to put more time in the animation frame-by-frame, this is a difficult and time-consuming process, but regarding the good flow of the story-line you have it would really improve your animation in my opinion. The music fitted well, but for the voices and voice actors I think it is important that there is an improvement here, the voice acting could have been done better.

You are talented in the flow of the story-line and adjusting that exactly to the time lapse, but work is needed on the audio and some of the graphics.

CrazyApple responds:

Thanks for the feed back!

[Beyond the Fog: Episode 1 - A Rude Awakening]

This is a good submission. The animation and graphics are very well done, I was especially amazed by the backgrounds which you had here. There were some problems with the pacing as someone else pointed out. There was a bit of a problem with the audio in some points, where the voices were a bit too loud, but overall I think this was good.

9Hammer responds:

Hey, thanks! I'll definitely be taking the critiques into consideration in the long run as well.

[Let's Blew It]

I think that I didnt get the joke, I liked the style and graphics of the fox, but I didnt get any of the other things.

Balram740 responds:

Thanks for your feedback.actually i'm new to animation so i will try my best for next animation.

[Space_Chuvak]

Ok, the starting scene was interesting, I like the effect with the colours and stars.

but there were several things in this. A guy being shot doesnt look like that, but would rather have enlarged eyes, or a different kind of pupils, hanging face.

This animation uses tweeking, instead of frame-by-frame animation, which could work, but a problem is in the style where the thickness of the lines is different which creates a problem in the perception. I would have done something different with the person laughing at the end, the ball which is used here to represent the inner part of his mouth is too big.

The scene was strange, you got that eery style well in your animation.

The music was good and fitting.

I tried to be constructive.

ArtemERROR404 responds:

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it)