The structure is good with a good intro and a proper build-up. I don't really hear confusion in it tbh, it sounds good to me.
The structure is good with a good intro and a proper build-up. I don't really hear confusion in it tbh, it sounds good to me.
A lot went down into this song as I hear it. It sounds like a peaceful landscape where someone is.
Good build-up and the outro is very nice, with the slowing down of the rhythm of the song which fits the emotional progress.
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That's really a sad story behind this. It actually reminds me how Aphex Twin came up with the "twin" part in his artist name because of the twin he never had which didn't make it living into this world.
A very nice piece with a lot of emotion into it.
Ah, I was not sure at the beginning but at around 0:35 when the square wave pushes in it becomes a very nice piece to listen to, I can clearly hear a similar style as the stuff which ParagonX9 used to make. The synth works well together with the bass wobble and the outro works very well as well. Especially for your age quite good stuff.
Oh well, thanks for the feedback. I highly suggest you check out my other songs though since this is really not my best work.
Very interesting loop. I agree that the synth coming in at around 0:25 could have slightly less delay, but I don't think that it's so much delay that it would completely distract. This works very well with a good balance between percussion and synths with a good progression, also melodic progression. I would have preferred it to be a bit longer but it sounds like good stuff.
Very nice progression in the song in the beginning, especially after the first minute when it goes to the lighter parts of the track. I can hear this is a nice instrumental track, I think that some vocals over this would work well though, while I was listening to this song I had the idea that a lot worked well together but that vocals would add the last touch to the song. Apart from that, a nice orchestral piece in which I clearly can hear stuff like Delain.
Thank you for a review! It is very important for me. Yeah, the piece was actually made with an eye on vocals. But but the vocalist of me is kinda bad. :D
Maybe someday I will put some vocals on it, who knows. :)
A very clear sound, you can clearly hear the depression of the music of Joy Division into this short piece. This works very well into the mind, it would be a very interesting piece to use for some kind of animation I would think.
The word 'isolation' comes to my mind when I hear this, these soft short synths around 0:24 work very nice as an atmospheric touch over this short song, my only criticism is that it's a bit short as everything is very well balanced, it would be interesting if it was a bit longer to see where it would go further and if it would bring the listener further into isolation.
you're the only person who has reference joy division isolation.
It's in demo, first phase.
This is a very nice short atmospheric piece with a good balance between everything and nice use of synths which sound distinct.
Thank you! I really appreciate the comment. :)
This is pretty neat, it obviously has a high quality sound to it.
Hey there, I am Astro-Reality. I produce music and digital art, but I also try my hand at animation and put my stuff here on Newgrounds.
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Joined on 10/1/18